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Old 18 Jan 07, 23:59   #8 (permalink)
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Это, конечно, классно.
Но ошибок много в английском. Для начала, хотя бы "freedom of speech", а не "speech of freedom"
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Это только пару примеров. Ошибок куча, особенно касательно порядка слов - исправьте, тогда будет классно
 
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